Soyala Amaya

Ok, I can't figure out how to do this, but it's easier to read if you copy it, put it in word, and center it. And if anyone knows how ...

I can understand how sometimes you just don't like the way a piece is written, and I can understand that, thanks for being honest. And I had been thinking about ...

Erm...I see no originality. This is exactly what's been written a thousand times by a thousand teens on a hundred lonely Saturday nights. sorry, it was all right, but...bland, hackneyed, ...

What's graphic? I'm really confused. I didn't kill anyone, there's no guts or anything, where's the graphic to make you hurl? And incandesence, is that a hurl because its bad ...

Hey everyone, thanks for your comments, it really makes me feel, well, not good (duh) but proud of my own talent that I can do this all right in the ...

Thanks, though I'm not sure about that line...I like how it just kind of ends...a litte symbolic, don't you think? And, yea, she did...kind of. She took a lot of ...

Thanks Meshugenah, this poem means a lot to me, and I want it to be the best that it can be. I made a few altercations, tell me what you ...

Ok, I made a few changes, tell me what you think now. And thanks for being honest bubble, a lot of the time simple honesty is lost in places like ...